My Own Storyboard and Plot Idea

Our film trailer has a genre of horror, here is an my story board an idea I have had for our film trailer. Each person in our group will come up with an idea then we will combine the best parts of all of them to create our final story board. After this we will plan our location and dates of filming and taking photos for the film trailer and accompanying parts.
Here is my story board of ideas for shots (click to make clearer).