Taking the comments into account we are going to completely change around the trailer. The slower begginning part is going to be cut down and take the "random" ending and make it into part of the story line. Add more twists and end it on a mysterious note (storyboard to follow). The outside location is also going to changed into somewhere with more potential, somewhere creepier where convention tells us that disappearances and strange goings on are more likely to occur. We are also going to replace the soundtrack as the two tracks we mixed do not go together very well. We will still be using the same website for the music but as mentioned before it is not something that can be done quickly because there is no speech in our trailer the soundtrack along with the copy has to do the talking. The copy will also be changed into something that can be easily understood, also it will be placed closer together as some people lost track of the story it was trying to tell.
Our magazine cover was overall a bit rushed. There is a couple of things that need to be altered in the editing such as the layering on photoshop, the image has the title over the top which is not conventional, the image overall is a good one. The background colour, red is too bright for a maazine cover, this will be changed and some more pugs added. The text is overall good, choosing appropriate fonts and colours.
In the overall analysis of the film poster I mentioned about applying an effect to the image, in our final piece we did not do that. This time we are going to make the background black and white with the people in colour, this will attract the focus to the people in the centre.
